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Tighten a meandering blog intro
Tighten flabby intros, kill cliches, and lift dwell time on existing posts
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- In today's fast-paced world, where everyone is constantly busy and time is at a premium, it has become more important than ever before to think very carefully about how we approach the topic of email marketing for small businesses.
- Goals
- clarity, brevity, no cliches
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Improved: 'Email is still the highest-ROI channel for small businesses -- but only if you treat it as a craft, not a chore. Here's how to do that without burning a Sunday.' Cuts 38 words to 28, removes the 'in today's fast-paced world' opener (the #1 reader skip-signal), and replaces vague claims with a concrete promise.
